Pages

Friday, 1 December 2017

Selfie cat

This week have been watching a video about a Selfie Cat, we had to watch the video very carefully and write a amazing piece of writing about it. I made a long story about it and hope you like it and have a great day😎👍.

W.A.L.T: Use adjectives, adverb and other interesting language. features to describe the setting and what is happening.

Click here to watch Selfie Cat

The Selfie cat

One  hot sunny day, I’m in the big hotel first floor and  its near food, the view is so wonderful. I was sitting in my colour full couch, I was taking a picture and publish into my InstaCat. I was happy because i'm in the first in the InstaCat, I have 2414 like . I show my fat  cat slowly go down in his couch, my fat  cat was fell down into the floor and my fat  cat was going into the cat cage.


I was see in my iPad  and someone take a photo and she was in the  first IntaCat is  Roxy Gomez because of his cat, there  13573 like , I feel  angry because  i'm not the first place in the IntraCat, I am in second place. I was going to trying to get the cat to take a photo with them, I was trying to pull them and take it a photo,  but he don’t want to. Then  I bring my fat  cat into the couch and take it a photo, I was trying to get my cell phone, but I always get bad photo.            


I  always click no because i don’t want to publish them,  because it's looks like  really bad photo.  Then  my fat cat  trying to kick me. Then I it took a photo, it was a very bad photo. Then my fat cat pulled me off my couch and I fell on the floor hard, then I grabbed my cat. Grabbed my phone and my phone took a photo.


Suddenly  My fat cat bit my hand and it was bleeding  it’s very bad, then  my cellphone was fly away and fell down into the floor, my fat cat was tried to run away from me again.   I want to bring my fat cat into the couch again but the cat was holding into my piano and   my fat cat was fell down into my piano, then very fast close.


Then slowly open and close, I’m so scared because I don't know my fat cat what he gonna do to me. I was slowly walking into the piano and suddenly my fat cat  slowly jump and fly, then my cellphone was fly away and take a very bad photo and very fast fell down.  Then my cat walking back into the cat toilet, then I said to myself that I don't get a good photo.

Suddenly I look back my cellphone i see that I am the first place in the InstaCat. Then I got 16270 like I was happy, then I have a one tooth broken with scratch from my fat cat.

The End

1 comment:

  1. Hey Jhun,

    I am Jade C from the Summer Learning Journey blogging team 2017-2018. I will be blogging with you this summer! I hope you are having a wonderful time with your friends and your family!

    Your writing 'Selfie Cat' is such an interesting story, it made me want to keep reading! The fact that there is an app called 'instacat' and taking pictures with the cat is hilarious and funny. I also have a cat named Mellow and he is a black cat with white heart on his neck. I can connect with the main character as I know how hard it is to take a good selfie with a cat. It's amazing how we can share our learning and fun ideas together through blogging online.

    I would love to blog more with you! To help you get started with blogging this summer, I have included the link to our Summer Learning Journey activities list.

    https://sites.google.com/site/summerlearningjourney/weekly-activities

    Let's go on the Summer Learning Journey together!

    All the best,

    Jade C.

    ReplyDelete

To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.

Note: only a member of this blog may post a comment.