This week have been watching a video about a Selfie Cat, we had to watch the video very carefully and write a amazing piece of writing about it. I made a long story about it and hope you like it and have a great day😎👍.
W.A.L.T: Use adjectives, adverb and other interesting language. features to describe the setting and what is happening.
Click here to watch Selfie Cat
W.A.L.T: Use adjectives, adverb and other interesting language. features to describe the setting and what is happening.
Click here to watch Selfie Cat
The Selfie cat
One hot sunny day, I’m in the big hotel first floor and its near food, the view is so wonderful. I was sitting in my colour full couch, I was taking a picture and publish into my InstaCat. I was happy because i'm in the first in the InstaCat, I have 2414 like . I show my fat cat slowly go down in his couch, my fat cat was fell down into the floor and my fat cat was going into the cat cage.
I was see in my iPad and someone take a photo and she was in the first IntaCat is Roxy Gomez because of his cat, there 13573 like , I feel angry because i'm not the first place in the IntraCat, I am in second place. I was going to trying to get the cat to take a photo with them, I was trying to pull them and take it a photo, but he don’t want to. Then I bring my fat cat into the couch and take it a photo, I was trying to get my cell phone, but I always get bad photo.
I always click no because i don’t want to publish them, because it's looks like really bad photo. Then my fat cat trying to kick me. Then I it took a photo, it was a very bad photo. Then my fat cat pulled me off my couch and I fell on the floor hard, then I grabbed my cat. Grabbed my phone and my phone took a photo.
Suddenly My fat cat bit my hand and it was bleeding it’s very bad, then my cellphone was fly away and fell down into the floor, my fat cat was tried to run away from me again. I want to bring my fat cat into the couch again but the cat was holding into my piano and my fat cat was fell down into my piano, then very fast close.
Then slowly open and close, I’m so scared because I don't know my fat cat what he gonna do to me. I was slowly walking into the piano and suddenly my fat cat slowly jump and fly, then my cellphone was fly away and take a very bad photo and very fast fell down. Then my cat walking back into the cat toilet, then I said to myself that I don't get a good photo.
Suddenly I look back my cellphone i see that I am the first place in the InstaCat. Then I got 16270 like I was happy, then I have a one tooth broken with scratch from my fat cat.
The End
Hey Jhun,
ReplyDeleteI am Jade C from the Summer Learning Journey blogging team 2017-2018. I will be blogging with you this summer! I hope you are having a wonderful time with your friends and your family!
Your writing 'Selfie Cat' is such an interesting story, it made me want to keep reading! The fact that there is an app called 'instacat' and taking pictures with the cat is hilarious and funny. I also have a cat named Mellow and he is a black cat with white heart on his neck. I can connect with the main character as I know how hard it is to take a good selfie with a cat. It's amazing how we can share our learning and fun ideas together through blogging online.
I would love to blog more with you! To help you get started with blogging this summer, I have included the link to our Summer Learning Journey activities list.
https://sites.google.com/site/summerlearningjourney/weekly-activities
Let's go on the Summer Learning Journey together!
All the best,
Jade C.