This week we have been watching a short video clip and then write a awesome piece of writing. I hope you like my story about Alma😎.
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Alma
One Day It was a snowy day and very cold. A little girl was walking in the very cold street there are chalkboard that had lots of names on it. Children had to put their name on the wall. The little girl’s names was Alma and she wrote her name on the wall.
She was write her name when she saw something in the shop. She cleaned the window and she went to go to the door. She try to open the door But the door did not open. She really wanted the doll.
The door magically open and the girl was happy she run in the shop and she open the door I knew this is a doll shop lot of doll.
Alma slowly walking inside the shop and she try to get the doll same to me alma she stop because she stepped the toys it was a boy on the tricycle and she picked it up the tricycle.
Then she put it back in the up in the tricycle then the tricycle he run in the door and he closed the door and so she turn around in the piano study of the doll and the doll it is a magically disappear.
The doll was on the shelf and Alma get the doll and she move the two glabs. She was scared in the doll and was touched the doll and she fell she was part of the doll.
Then her eyes it is move and she fell in the shelf she was a doll then she saw another doll in the window.
Hi JV, Nice story and I liked reading it. It made me feel like that I was really there. Nice work, keep it up.
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