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Friday, 1 September 2017

My adventure in the mountains

This week we had to write a awesome piece of writing by looking at a picture. I hope you like my story about my adventure and have a great day😎.


Hi my name is Danny, I am a bike rider. One day in the early morning I was driving my little blue boat in the rough, blue lake. I was going to have an adventure in the rocky  mountain. The water was sparkling  like a diamond, I saw a tiny sea lion dive from the grey sand  into the deep water. I was gonna stop drive in the boat because I see the big mountain. I  pushed my boat into the  sand and my shoes filled with water. I was get my bike and I rode  to the rocky  mountain and I say I was so excited to go in the mountain.


I rode my  bike over the big  rock and I jump my bike over the big rock. The wood lying on a big rock and I rode my bike on a steep and long wood. I was gonna try to jump my bike on the rock. My bike jump on the big rock and jump into the sand. I jumped through the waterfall as I felt something that felt like soggy and wet. I turned around my bike and jump on a green secret path that leaded me to the biggest mountain in Scotland. I was jumping into the big rock and I ride my bike. The bike is rotated and i ride my bike. I so exited to go in the rocky mountain.


I am in the top of mountain, I put my bike behind and I walk because my bike can’t go in the top of rocky mountain. I walk fast to go in the rocky mountain. It so scary when I was on  the top of rocky mountain the cloud is moving into away. I rode my bike slowly down and i’m so scared.  I say I will Just  trust myself and I will slowly down. I said in myself i’m far away  and I will fast my bike because I will never overlook the night.


My bike I put on my back and I will walk in the highest mountain. It's so hard to go in the highest mountain and i’m so scared. I get my bike and stand to the top of the mountain. I'm so happy because i’m the only one gonna go in the highest  mountain. I see a lots of clouds moving and i will gonna going back in the sand. I’ts so scared to go in the mountain  and to go back in the sand. I jump my bike into the rocky and its so scared, The rock is so big and it's so lots and i will turn right and i will slide my bike into the rock. I jump my bike into the rock and i try again  to slide in the rock.


I was jump my bike into the rock and I rode my bike and I said i’m close in my boat. I rode my bike into the grass and I flip my bike over the fence. I am in my boat and my boat is lost. I was sit in the sand and I said to myself this is my best ever adventure in the rocky mountain.
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