Once upon a time there was sun that shined like gold and diamond. There was a bird named Squab and there was another mean bird. Also another bird and his name was Fluffy and Fluffy was going to go in the electric wire.
Then Squab and Fluffy were fighting on the electric wire at the same time.There was another bird come on the electric wire and they become many bird join with them.
The all bird are very noisy talking to each other. and suddenly there was a big bird want to join with them but the all bird are don’t like to play with the big bird.so the bird are find ways to away from the big bird.
What happened is that the big bird was fall down from the wire. and The all birds was also fall down. and the big bird was laugh in the all bird. then the all the feathers of all the bird was removed.Then the big bird was laugh at them.
Wow JV! nice work, I like your writing because you've used some interesting words or juicy words I'd say, and I really like how you used some metaphors, I really really enjoyed reading it.๐๐๐๐๐ keep up the nice work!.
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