Selfie cat

This week have been watching a video about a Selfie Cat, we had to watch the video very carefully and write a amazing piece of writing about it. I made a long story about it and hope you like it and have a great day😎👍.

W.A.L.T: Use adjectives, adverb and other interesting language. features to describe the setting and what is happening.

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The Selfie cat

One  hot sunny day, I’m in the big hotel first floor and  its near food, the view is so wonderful. I was sitting in my colour full couch, I was taking a picture and publish into my InstaCat. I was happy because i'm in the first in the InstaCat, I have 2414 like . I show my fat  cat slowly go down in his couch, my fat  cat was fell down into the floor and my fat  cat was going into the cat cage.

I was see in my iPad  and someone take a photo and she was in the  first IntaCat is  Roxy Gomez because of his cat, there  13573 like , I feel  angry because  i'm not the first place in the IntraCat, I am in second place. I was going to trying to get the cat to take a photo with them, I was trying to pull them and take it a photo,  but he don’t want to. Then  I bring my fat  cat into the couch and take it a photo, I was trying to get my cell phone, but I always get bad photo.            

I  always click no because i don’t want to publish them,  because it's looks like  really bad photo.  Then  my fat cat  trying to kick me. Then I it took a photo, it was a very bad photo. Then my fat cat pulled me off my couch and I fell on the floor hard, then I grabbed my cat. Grabbed my phone and my phone took a photo.

Suddenly  My fat cat bit my hand and it was bleeding  it’s very bad, then  my cellphone was fly away and fell down into the floor, my fat cat was tried to run away from me again.   I want to bring my fat cat into the couch again but the cat was holding into my piano and   my fat cat was fell down into my piano, then very fast close.

Then slowly open and close, I’m so scared because I don't know my fat cat what he gonna do to me. I was slowly walking into the piano and suddenly my fat cat  slowly jump and fly, then my cellphone was fly away and take a very bad photo and very fast fell down.  Then my cat walking back into the cat toilet, then I said to myself that I don't get a good photo.

Suddenly I look back my cellphone i see that I am the first place in the InstaCat. Then I got 16270 like I was happy, then I have a one tooth broken with scratch from my fat cat.

The End

Haiku poem

This week we well be showing you about the Haiku poem, We had to made a slide show and made your own Haiku poem, I made two of them and I like you share with you hope you like it,  have a great day 😎👍.  
         

                        Haiku poem

About the sun

This week we have been doing our reading , well almost like reading , we have been reading about the sun , I have finished my DLO and I am happy to share it with you, I hope you like it and have a great day😎👍.

WALT: To find information about the sun.                                   

                                        About the sun
                                                             

Pigeon Impossible

This week we had to write a awesome piece of writing by looking at a video. I hope you like my story and have a great day 😎.

WALT: how to write in detail, in the first person.

Pigeon Impossible

Once upon a time, my name is Walter I was walking in the road. I

was setting down in the long green bench. I was eating my donut 🍩 in the long green bench. I was open my briefcase I saw some pigeon in the long green bench. The pigeon want to eat the donut with no icing. I was give the half of my donut no icing and the pigeon did not get the half of my donut. The pigeon fly over my head and I was throw my donut 🍩 into my briefcase and the pigeon fly into the donut. The briefcase was very fast close and the pigeon was close in the briefcase and the briefcase fell down into the floor.

The pigeon  was clicking the blue thing inside the briefcase. I was coming in the briefcase and  get it but the briefcase was jumping into the floor and i’m so scared. The people was running because of the briefcase and the briefcase was open his gun and shoots into the people. I was slowly run into the door close and the pigeon was click the red thing. The pigeon was very fast clicking the red thing and the gun was very fast.

I was almost hit of the gun, I was very fast running and get the briefcase but the briefcase turn on his wings and very fast fly. The briefcase was back and he was gonna hit me and I was jump into the floor and i’m so scared. I was see some donut and i'll get and run into the briefcase. I was saw to the pigeon the donut and the briefcase slowly down and ge throw  the donut into the sky and I was pushed the pigeon into the floor. The donut head shoots in the red thing. The building was slowly down and the rocket was going into the earth. I was get the briefcase and fly into the rocket, and the pigeon was following me and the second rocket is fell down and i’m about to miss. The pigeon was in the briefcase and I just click the gray thing and the donut was fell down and the pigeon was gonna get the donut. I was turn on my rocket and hit to the big rocket and the big rocket is gone. I was slowly down into the floor and I saw the birds was eating the donut and I’m walking in the road.

                                  The End

This is my DlO about writing

This week we have been researching about bees, we had to go website to website to find true information about bees, I made a DLO-Digital Learning Object and I am happy to share it with you, I hope you like it and have a great day😎👍. 

The WALT: to summaries information in my own words and to find the right information using many sources.

My story about Lily and the Snowman

This week we had to write a awesome piece of writing by looking at a picture. I hope you like my story about Lily and the snowman and have a great day 😎. But this time it is in a slideshow.
 

20 things we should say more often.

we watched a video about a little boy that told us 20 things we should say more often and then we made a video of the 20 things we thinks we should say more often.

My Exravaganza slideshow

My adventure in the mountains

This week we had to write a awesome piece of writing by looking at a picture. I hope you like my story about my adventure and have a great day😎.

Hi my name is Danny, I am a bike rider. One day in the early morning I was driving my little blue boat in the rough, blue lake. I was going to have an adventure in the rocky  mountain. The water was sparkling  like a diamond, I saw a tiny sea lion dive from the grey sand  into the deep water. I was gonna stop drive in the boat because I see the big mountain. I  pushed my boat into the  sand and my shoes filled with water. I was get my bike and I rode  to the rocky  mountain and I say I was so excited to go in the mountain.

I rode my  bike over the big  rock and I jump my bike over the big rock. The wood lying on a big rock and I rode my bike on a steep and long wood. I was gonna try to jump my bike on the rock. My bike jump on the big rock and jump into the sand. I jumped through the waterfall as I felt something that felt like soggy and wet. I turned around my bike and jump on a green secret path that leaded me to the biggest mountain in Scotland. I was jumping into the big rock and I ride my bike. The bike is rotated and i ride my bike. I so exited to go in the rocky mountain.

I am in the top of mountain, I put my bike behind and I walk because my bike can’t go in the top of rocky mountain. I walk fast to go in the rocky mountain. It so scary when I was on  the top of rocky mountain the cloud is moving into away. I rode my bike slowly down and i’m so scared.  I say I will Just  trust myself and I will slowly down. I said in myself i’m far away  and I will fast my bike because I will never overlook the night.

My bike I put on my back and I will walk in the highest mountain. It's so hard to go in the highest mountain and i’m so scared. I get my bike and stand to the top of the mountain. I'm so happy because i’m the only one gonna go in the highest  mountain. I see a lots of clouds moving and i will gonna going back in the sand. I’ts so scared to go in the mountain  and to go back in the sand. I jump my bike into the rocky and its so scared, The rock is so big and it's so lots and i will turn right and i will slide my bike into the rock. I jump my bike into the rock and i try again  to slide in the rock.

I was jump my bike into the rock and I rode my bike and I said i’m close in my boat. I rode my bike into the grass and I flip my bike over the fence. I am in my boat and my boat is lost. I was sit in the sand and I said to myself this is my best ever adventure in the rocky mountain.

                                                 The end      

My writing

The scared child

One day in the early morning the sun shone bright like a gold and diamonds. There was a child girl named Honey. She had a Dad and Mom. She wanted to go in the Grandma’s house. Honey had a  friend called Grace. I asked to Grace if she will go with me in My grandma’s house because it is a huge there are many toys and lots of healthy foods and  fruits. I asked Grace’s father and his mother if Grace can visit my grandma’s huge house.

Then the father and mother of Grace said yes. Grace was so thankful to his Parents. My mother call Grandma in the phone and tell that Me and my friend Grace want to visit her house. My father take me and my friend Grace went to grandma’s house. My grandma  picked me out of her house. My grandma said we are welcome to enter her house.

My grandma said you want a food i will give you food. I’m coming back i will get a food for you guys. I see something at the top of the stairs. It's was a bird and I ask my  grandma's what is the name of the bird and grandma said that the named is Twety. Twety is so silly bird and so crazy and so  bad bird.

Me and my friend was play inside the door. The bird escaped to his prison and went to my head. I'm so scared because the bird went to my head. I’m running to my grandma’s and my friends and grandma’s and friends she said what happened to you Honey and   i said the bird went to my head is so scared. I called my father and mother, father please take me here because I’m scared of being at my grandma’s house. The cellphone  you give to your grandma’s and i will talk. You said grandma’s you will protect my granddaughter.

Said grandma’s yeh but the bird escaped to his prison. Said father okay i will  get my granddaughter in your house because she scared in your house. Grace said friend your dad is on outside. Okay let's go friend into my house. Said Honey yeh hey we are here in our house. I’m so happy thanks friends to protect me in my grandma’s house. Do you know friends in my grandma’s house that my best ever experiment in the bird.

                                              The end

My 1800's DLO

This week we have been researching about what happened in the 1800's, then we had to find information  and make a DLO-Digital Learning Object. I have finished my DLO about 1800's and I am happy to share it with you. I hope you learn something from my DLO and have a great day😎. 

My Writing

Sweet Dog

Once upon a time in a far away Castle,,,lives a very cruel King,,,He left happiness behind. All the slaves suffered from his ruling. The King has a child named Sweetie,,,even Sweetie also suffered the cruelty from his father. Almost all the people from his Kingdom were already mad at the King. But, Sweetie really loves his father to get harmed by the people whose getting angry.

One day the King was feeling weak,,,he is getting older,,, and the whole kingdom want the King to be killed. Sweetie find a way to protect themselves from the people who want to kill them..then, she ask a favor from a fairy Godmother that if he can magic the king into a dog and Sweetie into a cupcake.

When the very angry people’s arrived at the Castle,,,they were surprise,,,no King and Sweetie in there instead they found a dog that is guarding a cupcake on the table.

Then the dog and the cupcake was in the table was set down.And the cupcake was not move and she can’t talk.Then the dog was can move and can shout.Then the dog was can get a food

Then the people was have a new  king  in the castle and he is a good king and the people in the castle was happy because they have a new king and very good king.And he not like in the another king.

Then the cupcake she can’t move like a ice and she can’t eat.Then the dog was find a food because the dog was hungry. And he find a food the food is a ham is yummy.And That dog and a cupcake is the King and Sweetie… END

    

The Big Blue Trouble

  

Once upon a time there was sun that shined like gold and diamond.  There was a bird named Squab and  there was another  mean bird. Also another bird and his name was Fluffy and  Fluffy  was going to go in the electric wire.

Then Squab and Fluffy were fighting on the electric wire at the same time.There was another bird come on the electric wire and they become many bird join with them.

The all  bird are very noisy talking to each other. and suddenly there was a big bird want to join with them but the all  bird are don’t like to play with the big bird.so the bird are find ways to away from the big bird.

What happened is that the big bird was fall down from the wire. and The all birds was also fall down. and the big bird was laugh in the all bird. then the  all the feathers of all the bird was removed.Then the big bird was laugh at them.

Persistent Pigeons

Once upon a time in the early morning there was three baby pigeons. In the Canada the three baby pigeons was singing over on the roof, then the three baby pigeons  were asleep in the nest the three baby pigeons.    

    

They  were hungry and they wanted to drink a water. Than the one pigeon saw something.  A cupcake on the top of the roof,then the three pigeons was going to get the one cupcake,    

    

Then the three pigeons was jump on the front in the cupcake. Then the one pigeons was have a idea,then the three pigeons was standing to try to get the cupcake.

Then the three pigeons fell down in the cement,then the three pigeons was have a another idea, he get a wood then the one pigeons was stand in the wood.

Then the two pigeons was jump on the wood then the the one was fly to go in the top of the roof then the one was field to get the cupcake,then the three pigeons was back on the nest. The three pigeons was see a shadow in the sky. The shadow was a worm,then the three pigeons was sad.

THE END

my slide show about paper plane

Ormie the pig

One day in the early morning there was a pig names is Ormie ,he was walking in the house ,he can smell a cookie in the jar on the top of the refrigerator he was excited to get a cookie ,he was try to jump to get the cookie in the jar  on  the top, then can't get the cookie in the jar  on the top,he  get a broom in the out sides he try to push the broom in the cookie in the jar, failed his plan.

He  have a another  plan, he get a small Chair he was try to jump a into the top of refrigerator to get the cookie,and the refrigerator magic open in the top, he was broken in the floor,and the top of refrigerator magic open and  inside of the refrigerator is ice and the ice is rebound,and  he was failed his plan.

He have a another plan,  he get a 4 books, and he get a iron board, and he get a bowling ball, and he put in the iron board,and failed his plan.

He have a another plan,he get a box and he put in the floor,and  he go in the box into top of refrigerator,and he fell down in the box, he was failed plan.

He have a another plan he was get a trampoline,and he was try to jump  in the top of refrigerator,and he was fell down in the trampoline

He have a another plan,he get a  plunger and he try to go into the top of refrigerator, he is in the top and the freezer,and the 2 freezer is open and  closed, he try to push the plunger,and  he walk back in the refrigerator,and the 2 plunger made a a exchange in the skin,and he his failed his plan.

He was have a new plan, he get a wood cutter and he try to cut the floor,and he back in floor,and  he get a bike and he try to jump the bike he can’t get the cookie,and  he have another plan he get a rope swing a he try to get the cookie in the top of refrigerator and he failed and he get a stick and he try to get the cookie in the top and he failed.

He have a new plan fishing yard and he try to get the cookie in the top of the refrigerator , he failed and  he get a rocket and he try to get the cookie in the top, he go in the airplane and he try to jump in the airplane,and n the cloud he get a umbrella, and  he falling down in the floor and he try to jump in the top of cookie,and he was dependable in the refrigerator,and the cookie is fallen in the floor,and  he catch the cookie in the floor,and he try to eat the cookie and the jar is fell down in the face of Ormie.

                                                THE END

                                       

              

My story about Alma

This week we have been watching a short video clip and then write a awesome piece of writing. I hope you like my story about Alma😎.

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Alma

One Day It was a snowy day and very cold.  A little girl was walking in the very cold street  there  are  chalkboard that had lots of names on it. Children had to put their name on the  wall. The  little girl’s names was Alma and she wrote her name on the wall.

She was write her name when she saw something in the shop. She  cleaned the window  and she went to go to the door. She try to open the door  But the door did not open. She really wanted the doll.

The door magically open and the girl was happy she run in the shop and she open the door I knew this is a doll shop lot of doll.

Alma slowly walking inside the shop and she try to get the doll same to me alma she stop because she stepped the toys it was a boy on the tricycle and she picked it up the tricycle.

Then she put it back in the up in the tricycle then the tricycle he run in the door and he closed the door and so she turn around  in the piano study  of the doll and the doll it is a magically disappear.

The doll was on the shelf and Alma get the doll and she move the two glabs. She was scared in the doll and was touched the doll and she fell she was part of the doll.

Then her eyes it is move and she fell in the shelf she was a doll then she saw another doll in the window.

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