About the sun

This week we have been doing our reading , well almost like reading , we have been reading about the sun , I have finished my DLO and I am happy to share it with you, I hope you like it and have a great day😎👍.

WALT: To find information about the sun.                                   

                                        About the sun
                                                             

Pigeon Impossible

This week we had to write a awesome piece of writing by looking at a video. I hope you like my story and have a great day 😎.

WALT: how to write in detail, in the first person.

Pigeon Impossible

Once upon a time, my name is Walter I was walking in the road. I

was setting down in the long green bench. I was eating my donut 🍩 in the long green bench. I was open my briefcase I saw some pigeon in the long green bench. The pigeon want to eat the donut with no icing. I was give the half of my donut no icing and the pigeon did not get the half of my donut. The pigeon fly over my head and I was throw my donut 🍩 into my briefcase and the pigeon fly into the donut. The briefcase was very fast close and the pigeon was close in the briefcase and the briefcase fell down into the floor.

The pigeon  was clicking the blue thing inside the briefcase. I was coming in the briefcase and  get it but the briefcase was jumping into the floor and i’m so scared. The people was running because of the briefcase and the briefcase was open his gun and shoots into the people. I was slowly run into the door close and the pigeon was click the red thing. The pigeon was very fast clicking the red thing and the gun was very fast.

I was almost hit of the gun, I was very fast running and get the briefcase but the briefcase turn on his wings and very fast fly. The briefcase was back and he was gonna hit me and I was jump into the floor and i’m so scared. I was see some donut and i'll get and run into the briefcase. I was saw to the pigeon the donut and the briefcase slowly down and ge throw  the donut into the sky and I was pushed the pigeon into the floor. The donut head shoots in the red thing. The building was slowly down and the rocket was going into the earth. I was get the briefcase and fly into the rocket, and the pigeon was following me and the second rocket is fell down and i’m about to miss. The pigeon was in the briefcase and I just click the gray thing and the donut was fell down and the pigeon was gonna get the donut. I was turn on my rocket and hit to the big rocket and the big rocket is gone. I was slowly down into the floor and I saw the birds was eating the donut and I’m walking in the road.

                                  The End