Selfie cat

This week have been watching a video about a Selfie Cat, we had to watch the video very carefully and write a amazing piece of writing about it. I made a long story about it and hope you like it and have a great day😎👍.

W.A.L.T: Use adjectives, adverb and other interesting language. features to describe the setting and what is happening.

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The Selfie cat

One  hot sunny day, I’m in the big hotel first floor and  its near food, the view is so wonderful. I was sitting in my colour full couch, I was taking a picture and publish into my InstaCat. I was happy because i'm in the first in the InstaCat, I have 2414 like . I show my fat  cat slowly go down in his couch, my fat  cat was fell down into the floor and my fat  cat was going into the cat cage.

I was see in my iPad  and someone take a photo and she was in the  first IntaCat is  Roxy Gomez because of his cat, there  13573 like , I feel  angry because  i'm not the first place in the IntraCat, I am in second place. I was going to trying to get the cat to take a photo with them, I was trying to pull them and take it a photo,  but he don’t want to. Then  I bring my fat  cat into the couch and take it a photo, I was trying to get my cell phone, but I always get bad photo.            

I  always click no because i don’t want to publish them,  because it's looks like  really bad photo.  Then  my fat cat  trying to kick me. Then I it took a photo, it was a very bad photo. Then my fat cat pulled me off my couch and I fell on the floor hard, then I grabbed my cat. Grabbed my phone and my phone took a photo.

Suddenly  My fat cat bit my hand and it was bleeding  it’s very bad, then  my cellphone was fly away and fell down into the floor, my fat cat was tried to run away from me again.   I want to bring my fat cat into the couch again but the cat was holding into my piano and   my fat cat was fell down into my piano, then very fast close.

Then slowly open and close, I’m so scared because I don't know my fat cat what he gonna do to me. I was slowly walking into the piano and suddenly my fat cat  slowly jump and fly, then my cellphone was fly away and take a very bad photo and very fast fell down.  Then my cat walking back into the cat toilet, then I said to myself that I don't get a good photo.

Suddenly I look back my cellphone i see that I am the first place in the InstaCat. Then I got 16270 like I was happy, then I have a one tooth broken with scratch from my fat cat.

The End

Haiku poem

This week we well be showing you about the Haiku poem, We had to made a slide show and made your own Haiku poem, I made two of them and I like you share with you hope you like it,  have a great day 😎👍.  
         

                        Haiku poem

About the sun

This week we have been doing our reading , well almost like reading , we have been reading about the sun , I have finished my DLO and I am happy to share it with you, I hope you like it and have a great day😎👍.

WALT: To find information about the sun.                                   

                                        About the sun
                                                             

Pigeon Impossible

This week we had to write a awesome piece of writing by looking at a video. I hope you like my story and have a great day 😎.

WALT: how to write in detail, in the first person.

Pigeon Impossible

Once upon a time, my name is Walter I was walking in the road. I

was setting down in the long green bench. I was eating my donut 🍩 in the long green bench. I was open my briefcase I saw some pigeon in the long green bench. The pigeon want to eat the donut with no icing. I was give the half of my donut no icing and the pigeon did not get the half of my donut. The pigeon fly over my head and I was throw my donut 🍩 into my briefcase and the pigeon fly into the donut. The briefcase was very fast close and the pigeon was close in the briefcase and the briefcase fell down into the floor.

The pigeon  was clicking the blue thing inside the briefcase. I was coming in the briefcase and  get it but the briefcase was jumping into the floor and i’m so scared. The people was running because of the briefcase and the briefcase was open his gun and shoots into the people. I was slowly run into the door close and the pigeon was click the red thing. The pigeon was very fast clicking the red thing and the gun was very fast.

I was almost hit of the gun, I was very fast running and get the briefcase but the briefcase turn on his wings and very fast fly. The briefcase was back and he was gonna hit me and I was jump into the floor and i’m so scared. I was see some donut and i'll get and run into the briefcase. I was saw to the pigeon the donut and the briefcase slowly down and ge throw  the donut into the sky and I was pushed the pigeon into the floor. The donut head shoots in the red thing. The building was slowly down and the rocket was going into the earth. I was get the briefcase and fly into the rocket, and the pigeon was following me and the second rocket is fell down and i’m about to miss. The pigeon was in the briefcase and I just click the gray thing and the donut was fell down and the pigeon was gonna get the donut. I was turn on my rocket and hit to the big rocket and the big rocket is gone. I was slowly down into the floor and I saw the birds was eating the donut and I’m walking in the road.

                                  The End

This is my DlO about writing

This week we have been researching about bees, we had to go website to website to find true information about bees, I made a DLO-Digital Learning Object and I am happy to share it with you, I hope you like it and have a great day😎👍. 

The WALT: to summaries information in my own words and to find the right information using many sources.

My story about Lily and the Snowman

This week we had to write a awesome piece of writing by looking at a picture. I hope you like my story about Lily and the snowman and have a great day 😎. But this time it is in a slideshow.
 

20 things we should say more often.

we watched a video about a little boy that told us 20 things we should say more often and then we made a video of the 20 things we thinks we should say more often.